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    It's been a while ...

    This shot is part of a series I worked on over the last few months.

    It fits well as part of the series, but I'm curious how it holds up on its own.

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    Re: It's been a while ...

    Josh - I can visualize what you're going for here, and I think it's almost there. What's missing is a warm(er) light on the left to draw the viewer's attention, and maybe more importantly, a person standing there to add a human element. Maybe a guy smoking a cigarette, or drinking a cup of coffee to warm up, etc. Also wish the "Dairy" lettering was better illuminated.

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    Re: It's been a while ...

    Thanks for the comments, G. I agree it would have been nice to have some of human element in the image. In others in the series I was able to get that, but not always.
    "Photography as a fad is well-nigh on its last legs, thanks principally to the bicycle craze."

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    The American Annual of Photography, 1897

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