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I shot this yesterday. Your comments and critique welcome.
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Re: Pointer
I like it. It could use a little more at the bottom an clone the logo on the right side. Skew the boat some.
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At first, I wanted to say that I did not like the boat at the bottom. However, without it, its a little humdrum for my taste. The boat / water actually adds a good / interesting element to it. On my screen, it looks a little soft as well ...I would check sharpness....
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Yeah, it DOES look soft here. That seems to happen with my uploads sometimes.
I do think the Kayak is important, the triangle pointing at the tree was what made it worth posting to me. I though about cloning out the letters, but I decided to keep 'em. Looking again, it would probably be better to clone them out.
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Re: Pointer
I realize that you're riding in that boat so you couldn't get the whole boat in the picture. I don't like it in the picture, I'd crop it.
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