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    For Those of You Who May Think I Only Shoot Nature...

    Taken with a D70 and 35mm 2.0 lens if I recall corectly. Your thoughts, comments, and suggestions appreciated.



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    Re: For Those of You Who May Think I Only Shoot Nature...

    Cute kids and pose. A little hot in the usual spots, forehead, chins, etc.

    Biggest and easiest suggestion I've got would be to crop just to right around their faces. The akimbo arms and part of the bench/chair don't lend much to this image for me.

    Great expressions, they must have been having a really fun time!
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    Re: For Those of You Who May Think I Only Shoot Nature...

    I remember your portraits and shots of the kids a good while back. They were always very good. i seem to remember one of the subject with a guitar? I like this for the great fun and interaction these two are having, and the exposure and clarity is very good. I think the girls arm is coming off a bit weird in the shot, and I agree a crop from the right might help overall. The birds on the branch, the kids on the chair. . . .it's all nature , isn't it?
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