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It has been too long since I have seen your pictures! This one is very good. I like the simplicity and separation of the levels. Even the different floors are toned from white to grey to black. I especially like the woman pointing to the people in level number 1. Solid work. Thank you for sharing it.
Interesting persepective as I really like overhead shots! The angle of the floors across the image really work well.
The right side and corner though let me down some. I would like to see the upper right have the triangluar piece fit into the corner better and the lower right has an odd angle formed at the corner with the table/display.
This does impart a strong sense of people in space in the vertical which many now live.
Hi CL, Glad to have your comment. I am happy that the shot works for you. All the best.
Hi drg, You are right about the right portion and it is my main worry. My inital plan was to have people on each level, however, my patience was not good enough. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
good composition. Feels like one of those serias of shots, only the angles are more dramatic. Good wide crop. Aside from the people placement, I dont think I'd change anything. I wish you waited a couple of seconds for the middle level people to get away from the edge.
Yoyo, good perspective as is the case with many of your shots. This has a good feeling of depth with the three levels included. I only find both lower corners to feel abit busy and cramped, but still the overall impact of the piece works
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