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Thread: At the pond

  1. 02-15-2007, 03:39 PM #1
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    At the pond

    I like this shot but the power line are distacting me, what do you think?

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    Re: At the pond

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    Re: At the pond

    I really didn't notice them that much. Good composition on this on. The lines could very easily be removed..
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    Re: At the pond

    its a nice enough image.. power lines are a fact of life they dont bother the image that much..

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    Re: At the pond

    You call those power lines??? you should the ones over here.....lol....

    Very nice shot, my only issue is with that metallic shape at the left-center...right above the water....maybe a small tilt to the right with a small sidestep left to keep the compostion...

    but rather a very nice image!

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  6. 02-16-2007, 11:04 AM #6
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    Re: At the pond

    Nice image - power lines don't bother me that much. Might be curious to see it in b&w?
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  7. 02-16-2007, 12:31 PM #7
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    Re: At the pond

    It's a nice peaceful shot. I like the composition and the overall emotion of the folks here. you can almost feel the air and the quietness.

    The background is decent but I'd lose those lines, definitely. It will make it a lot stronger. Here's a shot of a model I took a few yrs ago. I removed the lines in Corel PhotoPaint. As you can see, a lot less distracting.

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