How about this then? :)

[payn817]

I tried, although I have no photography or editing knowledge, and didn't know what to do...owell.
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[jar_e]

Much better. Those colors are superb and perfect.

Nice shooting,

Jared

[bdbloom]

On my monitor (admittedly not calibrated right now) I lose the details on the upper-left side of the flower after your color correction. However, the yellow is vibrant and beautiful; maybe something in between the original and this one would be better?

It's distracting that the top petals got cropped. You might play with the crop a bit, taking some more off the top and right to make it look intentionally cropped. You may want to get rid of some of the space to the left of the flower, too.

It's a great start; beautiful photo.