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    Tokyo Skyline

    Here is a shot I had some fun with as I was going through my old Tokyo photos from a year ago. The clouds that day were amazing and I had some time to kill so I went to the Tokyo Tower to have some fun. I have been to Tokyo many times but that was the first time I went to the top of the city's iconic tower and the view was well worth the trip. Hope you enjoy :smile:


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    Re: Tokyo Skyline

    I like the overall look and feel a lot, but the tower feels cut off too much or does not want the companionship of the lesser building or something.

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    Smile Re: Tokyo Skyline

    Love the sun rays filtering through the clouds. I would have taken a portrait or used a wider angle focus to capture the complete view.

    A bit of post processing may help as well, try adding Saturation and Vibrance to enhance sun rays and clouds. See if you can attach RAW for us to play with.

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    Re: Tokyo Skyline

    you've captured the rays really well. very whimsical shot. I agree with daq, i think a wider shot including more in would've been a great improvement to this.
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