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Hi Yoyo
I'm happier viewing this as a troupe of trees that have taken on a life form and are intent on putting on a ballet for us rather than street fighters. They are far too nice.
If I look at it as just a group of trees I feel that it might look better in colour with that nice bark and foliage/blossom. As trees I would like to see more of them,(below waiste lol) and not cut off so suddenly.
Always something interesting from you Yoyo.
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Strange picture. It seems surreal somehow, like it was taken on anothe planet. Not sure I like the tight crop - seems confined. But that might be important to the overall effect. The b&w is good, imo.
GB
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Yoyo, very creative. I agree with Tom in that these look more to me like dancers, perhaps modern or ballet and i think having a bit of color would strengthen that appearance and feel even moreso. I feel the crop is a bit too tight at the top, but it does still look quite effective. With the critiques , this is still a fine, artsy image. good work
Hi Tom, I agree with your suggestions about the composition. I chose B&W because the background is a green wall, which is not very appealing. By the way, ithe subject is a bonsai and the size of the pot is about 2 f by 1 f.
Hi GB, Thanks for your insight. I did not think it was related to outerspace. Very good interpretation!
Hi Gary, Thanks for the kind comments as always. I agree that a less tighter crop would have a more comforting appeal.
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