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Thks. So much for my artistic endeauver. I thought it looked like an old painting from France..
GB
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Well, the effect certainly looks like impressionism. I think the overall composition is too tight around the paper dispensers. Some better lighting on them as well will help pull them out nicely.
GB, I like it!! The first one I mean. I've been tinkering with stuff like this for a while and haven't been able to get it right. At least, so I've been told. Have you tried it on a softer subject (flowers, a child, a garden, etc)?
You did a great job but it may just be the subject matter.
Thanks for commenting everyone. Somehow, I associate the papers with Paris France, but I'm not sure why.. La Media. I was there a couple times, perhaps I saw a lot of paper machines... Don't remember exactly.
D, nice to see you're back! Where'd you go? I'll try your flower idea. -GB
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I as well like #2 except for the traffic signal in the background. #1 does away with it well. I think the effect is just too strong on the paper boxes.