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    Packard A or Packard B?

    Decisions, decisions. I shot this in RAW, and I'm getting caught up in the details, so to speak. "A" is my first version (but it uploaded as the last shot), then I went back and tweaked it so that there is more detail in the shadow below the hood mascot (first shot in post.) I can't decide which is better. That's where you all come in! Thanks for looking!
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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    Be aware that the images do NOT always show in the same order on everyones screen.

    My fav is the first because that is the one where I see more detail.

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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    I'm actually seeing more shadow detail in the second and, consequently, like that one better.

    Fantastic shot.

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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    For the same reasons as Dray I think the second or lighter image is the better of the two
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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    I prefer the punch of the brighter one (am Assuming that's "B")
    Packages have the most awesome hood ornaments! This is a great shot.

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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    I like them both but I like the shadows in the first photo best. makes it more interesting.

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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    The first one is a stronger image for me. I think the highlights are a little more under control ...

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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    Seeing them side by side I think I prefer the original dark one as there is more mood and punch. i don't think any detail is needed in the shadow of the ornament.
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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    i'm with Gary. I got with the 1st one. I don't like the detail in the shadows in the 2nd shot. it loses emphasis. too many competing elements in the 2nd shot.

    for that reason. i go with 1.
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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    Great feedback! Thanks for looking and responding, everyone!
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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    Very nice creative shot I like it.

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    Re: Packard A or Packard B?

    I prefer the one with the better lit subject (the bottom image). It just provides more information, a good thing when it's the subject. This is a crazy picture! It's really hard for me to figure it out ... aooww!
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