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  • 06-08-2008, 03:22 PM
    jkriminger
    over the top
    a little night shot that has been hanging around
  • 06-09-2008, 02:16 PM
    Shooter Tiff
    Re: over the top
    Beautiful. The color of the water and the colors bouncing of the bridge are great. My only thought of improvement is that it seems a bit tilted to the right to me
  • 06-09-2008, 02:20 PM
    retroactiv
    Re: over the top
    that would make a great HDR... I don't know if I'm seeing the tilt, that could just be me though. Great great shot.
  • 06-09-2008, 02:38 PM
    SmartWombat
    Re: over the top
    Partly tilt, partly perspective, partly barrel distortion.
  • 06-09-2008, 03:04 PM
    Coastal Flyer
    Re: over the top
    Almost looks like a cartoon. Really a great shot; nice job!

    CF
  • 06-09-2008, 03:16 PM
    yairh20
    Re: over the top
    I love it! the colors are amazing especially in the waterfall!
  • 06-09-2008, 03:42 PM
    jkriminger
    Re: over the top
    Thanks for your comments everyone. I think I did level this one a bit but like Paul said theres a lot of factors here... It was handheld at 1s @ f4 with the vr 18-200 which allows for some distortion. The colors drew me but composition was hard.
  • 06-09-2008, 05:46 PM
    Herriot
    Re: over the top
    Handheld! I think you have done very well, the colours are outstanding, perhaps missing some action in the foreground but the composition works well overall.
  • 06-11-2008, 10:48 AM
    MB1
    Re: over the top
    I love the colors and that you hand held this is pretty impressive.

    I speculate that the image would have a lot more impact with about a 25% crop from the left till there is only one palm tree to the left of the bridge (removing the traffic cones and the wall behind them).

    MB1
    Croping fool
  • 06-11-2008, 12:58 PM
    jkriminger
    Re: over the top
    thx Herriot and MB..good crop suggestion, I think I 'll try to keep most of the fountain area..thx.
  • 06-11-2008, 01:20 PM
    jkriminger
    Re: over the top
    heres a crop..?..
  • 06-11-2008, 02:33 PM
    Frog
    Re: over the top
    I usually agree with MB on his crop advice but in this case I like the uncropped version better.
  • 06-11-2008, 03:11 PM
    jkriminger
    Re: over the top
    I think your right frog...something about the red of the road helps balance out the top.
  • 06-11-2008, 06:03 PM
    starriderrick
    Re: over the top
    I think the original uncropped version "feels" better.Nice work, Rod.

    Rick
  • 06-12-2008, 04:07 PM
    jkriminger
    Re: over the top
    ...thx Rick