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    Too square to be hip. almo's Avatar
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    Fan

    I shot this as a noise test. I was rather taken by the look of it so I converted it to mono and croped it.

    Thoughts are welcomed.
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    Re: Fan

    It was better as a noise test. Pattern and shapes are interesting, but the shadow is too dark, in the way, and distracting and tones, sharpness and lighting also need to be worked on to improve it.

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