• 02-23-2013, 07:33 PM
    Greg McCary
    An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    What do you think? Very little PS work.

    http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8377/8...e35a41dc_b.jpg
    Truck and Flash Gels by Cosmonaut's, on Flickr
  • 02-24-2013, 02:52 AM
    hminx
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    I like the green interior light sorta Steven King-ish but I'm not so keen on the yellow hue around the front of the truck, they don't seem to tie up. The other thing about this the horizon possibly a bit centred I'd liked to have seen a tad more grass and a dark gradient at the bottom.
  • 02-24-2013, 07:54 AM
    TomHarmon
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Seems the truck is a little underexposed to me. I think if you balance the key light with the green light a bit, the truck will stand out a lot more.
  • 02-24-2013, 08:48 AM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Thanks Pete, thanks Tom. It looks a bit to dark as you say on my IPad. It looks much better from my PC but I will check out the brightness. Pete I did crop it some maybe I centered it to much. I can easily go back to the drawing board.
  • 02-24-2013, 12:12 PM
    f86sabjf
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    I agree
    I like the green but not the yellow. Perhaps an alien hand reaching up or hanging out the drivers window would be really cool
  • 02-24-2013, 01:27 PM
    Don Schaeffer
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Well done. Looks positively spooky.
  • 02-24-2013, 01:35 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Thanks f86sabjf, Thanks Don. I usually don't use a gel on the hand held flash but thought I need to mix it up.
  • 02-24-2013, 03:32 PM
    ELS
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    :cool: E.T. phoning home (sitting in the truck cab)...:D

    I like it Greg!

    Thanks for sharing,

    Ed
  • 02-24-2013, 05:06 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Thanks Ed, some do, some don't but its fun putting one together.
  • 02-24-2013, 10:34 PM
    GB1
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Nice shot Greg. I like the 'cleanness' of your image here.

    I'd have to agree on the yellow, just doesn't quite connect. But I do love the green, though I think I'd rather just see a hint of it instead of the entire cab filled.

    One thing I would really like to see however is a little more space between the car and the bottom of the frame. No one else has mentioned it, but I think it's a tad tight.

    Good background, composition.

    G
  • 02-26-2013, 03:06 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    That's a good observation GB. The first shots I took clipped the bottom portion of the truck out. It was very dark and I recomposed. So I agree with that. Maybe I can drop the yellow in Lightroom or somehow change it in PS. So I guess the yellow is voted out.
  • 02-26-2013, 03:21 PM
    ELS
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Hi Greg:

    Maybe a flash (Splash) of red for the continued:

    Martian (Mars = Red Planet) - Alien effect..? :cool:

    Whatever way you present these "Flash Gel photos,
    are always cool looking to me." :)

    Thanks for sharing with us,

    Have a nice day...

    Ed
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  • 02-27-2013, 01:23 AM
    hminx
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    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Possibly a bit over the top Greg, but this is how I envisage the shot to be.
  • 02-27-2013, 07:45 AM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Well I like it Pete. I'll kill the yellow.
  • 02-27-2013, 06:12 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Thanks Ed for the input.
  • 02-27-2013, 06:14 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by hminx View Post
    Possibly a bit over the top Greg, but this is how I envisage the shot to be.

    How did you add the fore ground Pete, duplicate some of it? That's a cool trick.
  • 02-27-2013, 11:42 PM
    hminx
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Greg McCary View Post
    How did you add the fore ground Pete
    .

    The extra grass came about by extending the bottom of the image and using "Content aware fill" in CS5. It doesn't do too bad a job with rough textures like grass, but I cleaned up any obvious repetition with the cloning tool. Black gradient to finish.
    I think the cloning tool would have done the whole job, but content aware fill saves a lot of time.
    I hope you don't mind the other edits....:)
  • 02-28-2013, 10:37 AM
    Adamo
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    I liked the shot as is, and until I saw Pete's version, the yellow didn't bother me at all. That being said, it was a good image, Pete's version catapulted this shot to great. I want to try out some color gels now
  • 02-28-2013, 03:16 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: An Old Rusty Truck and some Flash Gels.
    Thanks again Pete and I agree Adamo. I have already fixed the yellow but need to add the grass.