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    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
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    Who are you looking at ?

    Spotted this at the Verzammelaarsjaarbeurs in Utrecht.
    My wife was looking for dolls, I was fighting against the (un)available light even after going to a really noisy 800ISO, but there was no way I could resist these two
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    Re: Who are you looking at ?

    Can't edit it any more, I was going to change the title to see if anyone looked at it.
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    Re: Who are you looking at ?

    Paul,

    I like the composition to the photo and its interesting - the only criticism I have is the big block of white in the top left which I found distracting. Perhaps it could be filled in with some colour or something.
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    Re: Who are you looking at ?

    The back wall was white painted plasterboard, if it had been breeze blocks like the wall byt he door it wouldn't have been so bad.
    I went back next day to re-shoot it, and the stall owner hadn't hung his jacket between the two mannequins, and the whole look was different.

    If I had more than Photoshop LE, and perhaps an idea how to use it, I'd try burning that top right area a bit darker.
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