Off My Back Deck

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  • 09-06-2008, 11:46 AM
    Abiciriderback
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    Off My Back Deck
    Took some shots at sunset off my back deck last night. processed in HDR each pict consist of 3 separate shots then converted into jpeg. Any help feedback on processing or any feedback in general would be appreciated.

    Thanks
    Ray Still
  • 09-06-2008, 01:32 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: Off My Back Deck
    I like the HDR effect in that it brought out detail in the tree, My only suggestion would to be crop some of the sky out. Nice work.
  • 09-06-2008, 03:32 PM
    Dubbs5050
    Re: Off My Back Deck
    Well done...nice capture. I too would start with cropping a bit of the top off. Great colors....looks like a forest fire....kind of demonic. Good shot.
  • 09-06-2008, 09:01 PM
    DLB1973
    Re: Off My Back Deck
    I second the above mentioned....crop top and good to go. Must have been to col to be there..

    Thanks

    db

    'Have a peaceful evening...'
  • 09-06-2008, 10:28 PM
    Frog
    Re: Off My Back Deck
    Fully agree with the above.
  • 09-07-2008, 02:25 AM
    SmartWombat
    Re: Off My Back Deck
    The sky looks good, I agree with removing the grey at the top and concentrating on the colours.
    I don't like the lighter halo around the tree, really unnatural.
    Is it because it was windy and the tree was moving?
  • 09-07-2008, 02:36 AM
    Don Schaeffer
    Re: Off My Back Deck
    I don't think it should be cropped at all. The firey sunset needs the dark contrast.