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unfortunately, the would not allow me to bring my camera inside, so here are two pictures i took outside, one is a glass, long triangle on the top of the building, that forms the star of david, and the other is a monument commemorating those who fought back.
I think the first image is too cool but it could just be the light through the glass.
The second image is a really nice capture of a tall object. I like the way the light hits it too. I might crop it from the bottom to just below the lettering to increase the impact of the words, OTOH that would take a bit away from the impressive height.
By too cool, do you mean the color temperature? I don't want to crop the second because I think the streaks of, i guess rain, kinda look like the blood that was spilled while these brave men and woman fought for their freedom...