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Thread: Occulus 2

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    Occulus 2



    The irony is a bit pedestrian. But my favorite shot of the session. A couple other good ones coming though.

    On the sad side, my digital rebel completely stopped functioning. Dead. Deceased. Annoying.

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    Re: Occulus 2

    Seems a little chopped off on her left arm. I like unconventional compositions, but I think her head and right arm are too close to the sides of the frame. The lack of eye contact is understandable given she is looking at the mirror, but not seeing her eyes at all sort of hurts in this one. Nice colors though, the green really shines (St Patrick's Day shot? ).

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