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    Man waiting to arrive

    Well here is a shot i took on a train, bit of blur in photoshop, and well, im happy? what do you all think?
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    I've brought up the idea before of cropping to a square shot - not everyone's favorite. But I think this is a good one for it, and I'd cut out the bottom. If you do that, the seat backs will form two smaller squares dividing the shot into quarters. Try it and see what you think (just scroll up and down a little and let the bottom of the shot fall below your monitor).

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    I think it's a good shot.
    One thing: the right side of the picture is a bit distracting to my opinion. Dont know how to explain it in english but it looks like there are some 'circular stripes' (really don't know a better word for it) over the window and beneath it.

    Maybe someone understands what I mean and can explain it in a better way. ;)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jezz
    Well here is a shot i took on a train, bit of blur in photoshop, and well, im happy? what do you all think?
    Interesting title...almost oxymoronic.

    I have to agree with the square crop.

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    i like this. i'd like to see the original, without the blur effect... and maybe the crop as the others suggest, but i think it's a nice capture of the moment
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