the nephew [image]

hey all, heres one of my nephew i took awhile back, seems to be an alright image...comments?

[IMG]http://**********/ryan_door.jpg[/IMG]

todd

I love it minus the glare. The tones are great, and his expression is priceless, yet the glare distracts from it. Nice shot though,

Jared

thx jared, i knew the glare would bother people cause it kinda bothered me. but this was one of those shots that wasnt ment to be,, it was a spur of the moment click.

todd

It appears like there is some sort of apparition in the window above him?

Love the composition and tones!

Wendy :)

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Originally Posted by stuntboy

hey all, heres one of my nephew i took awhile back, seems to be an alright image...comments?
todd

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I think the apparition did a good job capturing this little goofing around moment. I'd crop it something like this to move his face away from center and remove the identifiable part of the grill whi I think pulls the eye out to the edge of the picture. The glare enforces in our mind that he has his face pushed up against a window pane and really isn't a problem since it doesn't obscure his face.
I like the tones throughout the frame - lots of interesting textures and little details when we want to look at them. It might need just a slight ccw rotation.

Hi SBoy,

Nice shot. I also agree with Chunk on the crop idea.
Tim

thank you all for the suggestions...heres the crop and adjustment, comments?

[IMG]http://**********/ryan_002.jpg[/IMG]

todd

Dear Todd,

Very nice. The black and white works very well on this one. The door is a rich black and that helps your nephew's face stand out nicely. I like how you captured this shy, curious moment. The staples on the second crop might be a little distracting, but I wouldn't worry about them.As was mentioned, the glare is a tad distracting, as are the smudges, but you couldn't really help having those. A very nice job. Worth framing I might suggest. A keeper.

Drew