Neon Flora

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  • 03-09-2008, 09:15 PM
    Ptax
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    Neon Flora
    Some neon palm trees shot at night. Fire away with feedback..
  • 03-10-2008, 06:30 AM
    MB1
    Re: Neon Flora
    Great idea and pretty good exposure.

    I sort of wish you had stepped back just enough to get the entire fronds in the image but that isn't a real big deal.

    I'd crop the red image from the top to kill that blank space.
  • 03-10-2008, 09:00 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: Neon Flora
    Not bad, Ptax. I also think the crops are too tight but they can work as they are. If you are up to the task I suggest removing the cable line across the second image.
    Do you have any others that are not so tightly framed? I'm thinking there must have been other distractions you were trying to avoid.
    Good exposure.
  • 03-10-2008, 09:07 AM
    Frog
    Re: Neon Flora
    I agree that you need a wider view. The chopped fronds don't alllow the eye to travel.
    The exposure is great, though,
  • 03-10-2008, 09:07 PM
    Ptax
    Re: Neon Flora
    Thanks for the positive remarks. :-) I agree with all the remarks about the cropped fronds (I think that is the first time I have ever typed "fronds"). The problem, as Gary suggested, was that there were surrounding items I did not want in the pic- power pole, building and other signage.