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Thread: My Girls

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    My Girls

    Pictures of my girls.
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    Re: My Girls

    lovely girls and shots. I think the 2nd one is the stronger one. Her pose and look portray great strength and the background is a great backdrop, although I think there is a strong yellow tint to this shot that can be corrected easily through photoshop. Still a very nice shot though.

    Here's a somewhat corrected version.

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    Re: My Girls

    I would like to see these portraits without the inserted backdrop maybe something more neutral.

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    Re: My Girls

    This is the original picture just resized.
    This picture i took with an olympus E-500
    and a 14-45 f3.5 olympus digital lens,
    with an olympus flash, and a sun defuser,
    ISO 100, F10 1/160 Just north of Santa Clarita CA.
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