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I think this is too busy. Looks almost like a blended multiple exposures.
The white traces are not working with the egg thing in the middle, and maybe most of all - the colors just aren't pleasant hues at all.
Though the lines are somewhat random, there is a human controlled element to the randomness, and not the same kind of natural random patterns you can find elsewhere. The big curves to the small jagged lines show a deliberate human effort, I personally like to see no human interference with abstracts akin to this.
I appreciate the extreme practice and experimentation though, I'm sure it was fun to shoot.
Not an easy image to form an opinion on daq.
In a weird sort of way it is the ugliness of this mess that gives it it's attraction. But as a photographic image it does not work for me.
Reminds me very much of a certain deposit I regularly made during my days of consuming copious pints of a certain black beverage.
Must say though that I really enjoyed your other egg creations.
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
Yeah there is a lot to dislike about it. I guess you aren't experimenting well unless you fail sometimes. On the upside I did not poison my cats with the painted meat in this photo, but I was worried about it for a moment...
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