Nature Shots

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  • 08-21-2008, 11:17 AM
    faint545
    Nature Shots
    I'm a bit iffy on a couple of my shots, so some critique is well appreciated.

    http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs19/i/20...y_Faint545.jpg

    http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs32/i/20...y_Faint545.jpg
  • 08-21-2008, 11:45 AM
    Dylan8i
    Re: Nature Shots
    i think the first image has alot of potential. first thing i would have done is drop down lower to eliminate the roof in the background, maybe even the trees, and to isolate the front grass/grain? against the sky. the lighting is awesome lighting up all the rest of the grass, but the lens flair is definitely detracting from the image
  • 08-21-2008, 01:14 PM
    GB1
    Re: Nature Shots
    Ha.. when I first saw these shots they immediately reminded me of Maryland. No coincidence I guess (the eastern shore?).

    I like the angle you shot these at - it creates a feeling of size and envelopment. The bottom one's a little chopped off and the top one was probably shot in the wrong direction - towards the sun - or at a bad time of the day. So there's some room for improvement.

    The colors are great. I don't think you could have gotten them any better. The bottom one's a tad contrasty.

    Try getting even lower and aiming up at about a 30 to 60 degree angle. That will REALLY shot the size of the corn stalks (assuming that they're tall this year).

    Tks for posting

    G
  • 08-21-2008, 01:19 PM
    Nick McC
    Re: Nature Shots
    The glare from the sun is distracting in the first and the second may have been better with a wider aperture... but other than that I really like the shots!
  • 08-21-2008, 06:14 PM
    faint545
    Re: Nature Shots
    hm.. thanks for your inputs!