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Thread: Last Seed

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    Last Seed

    I thought this was a fun one...I just wish the seed had been more in the darker part of the background, as it would have shown up better.

    Emily
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    Re: Last Seed

    Emily,

    I think you answered your own critique. If the angle had been a little more pointed down and had placed the last seed on that dark green I think the shot would've been much better. I like this idea though, good composition with the stem of the flower too. Good shot though, nice eye for composition.

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    Re: Last Seed

    Em - Hard to say about this one ..... I think the background has sooo much potential, but it just 'misses' for me. The area behind the stalk is too dark and like you said, perhaps the area behind the seed is too light (?) So swap the colors and you're fine. The stalk is also a tad too soft.

    Oh well, try another.

    GB

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    Re: Last Seed

    Jared & GB...yep...this one was definitely more of an attempt than a decent shot, I think. Thanks for your feedback...I appreciate it!

    Emily

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