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    Backyard Barn reshoot!

    I hope this is the last one...heheheh :P I like this one a lot more. I took more time on the processing of this image.


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    Re: Backyard Barn reshoot!

    I like it. The exposure appears accurate. Nothing is blown out and nothing is lost in the shadows. I like the composition but wouldn't mind less sky. I would push the saturation on the shot to make it a little more surreal. Good job.
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    Re: Backyard Barn reshoot!

    Thanks!

    If anyone is interested, here is the preprocessed version:
    The photoshopped thread!
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    Re: Backyard Barn reshoot!

    Nice job with the PP. I'd love to see an HDR version of this as well. If only I knew how to produce HDR shots...

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    Re: Backyard Barn reshoot!

    Nice work. Looking better with every post of this barn.

    You need to shoot that truck too, that's a cool pickup truck.
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    Re: Backyard Barn reshoot!

    My thoughts...I'd like to see this angle taken like your original picture from the front. Eliminating the modern vehicles...get that bushy tree less prominent with the left angle..get some early morning shots and evening light going. Then see how they look in black n white and sepia too. Set that 1800s era mood. Get inside..throw some dust in the air and see if you can catch some neat sun ray shots through all those cracks looking out..etc..

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    Re: Backyard Barn reshoot!

    Thanks for the comments everyone!
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    Re: Backyard Barn reshoot!

    This is the best of the series. I think a filter would have helped here too. But the composition and exposure are fine here.
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