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Nice shot, I really like the expressions and their eyes. The kid looks a little scared, but maybe it was the humming of the flash (?) Also, The way you added a slight tilt to the photo really worked here, adds a touch of eligance and humor.
The only thing that I could suggest would be to improve the focus.
I agree with GB1 on the focus but sometimes you get what you get and you gotta work with it.
I must say that this is a very beautiful, very touching shot and think you did a great job capturing the moment.