Metel 2

Another photo of a recent model.

The lighting was very even here so I tried some slight processing. The first is normal, the next two edits. Which do you prefer? The differences are slight, so you will probably have to look closely.

Also, do you like the amount of negative space.

Thanks for critiquing.

G


http://www.gregbulla.com/Photography..._1_pp_1200.jpg


http://www.gregbulla.com/Photography..._3_pp_1200.jpg


http://www.gregbulla.com/Photography..._2_pp_1200.jpg

I like the last one better. Still, the highlights on her face I think could tune down by a tad. I guess I'm saying I prefer her face look probably somewhere between that in the second and the third image.

I like the additional sharpness/contrast in the third best. Great background!

Thanks fellows! This is one a little bit hard to figure out which way to go. We used an off camera light source but I think it may have smoothed out the lighting a bit too much. Or the overcast skies did that. Her expression is sort of stoic here, which is pretty much her style actually. The jeans I don't know about ... I suggested worn out pants with holes, but these look like someone just took a scissors to a pair of new jeans. Maybe I will crop those out, at least down to the pt above the holes.

GB

I like your work. My only nitpick is the holes in her jeans. It would've been better if the holes had been already there (i.e. part of the design), rather than man-made.

Hope that was helpful.