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    Mellieha Bay by night

    Mellieha Bay by night. Long exposure
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    Re: Mellieha Bay by night

    Great exposure, pleasant lights and shapes, I think the composition is a little dead on and the entire bottom of the frame falls into negative space. If you can do it again, maybe hop up on the roof of a car, or bring a ladder or something, assuming you could feasibly do that with a tripod on the roof of your car. Or if you get up much higher somewhere further away and use a more telephoto range. The lights in the city are the most interesting details of the composition and they get the least attention in it as well. The higher perspective could help make the lake and the city lights more prominent in the frame.

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    Re: Mellieha Bay by night

    I think getting closer to the lake and putting something at waters edge. Another element. As is it needs a point of interest.
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