Look up & Smile

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  • 09-17-2008, 10:06 PM
    starriderrick
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    Look up & Smile
    You are being watched...Any ideas... Does this comp. work? :cool: Thanks

    Rick
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  • 09-18-2008, 05:46 AM
    Addies Granddaddy
    Re: Look up & Smile
    Hmmmmmm. Can't make up my mind. I think it needs something to hold it together.....like, the reflection of a person looking up? JMHO.
    John
  • 09-18-2008, 01:15 PM
    jetrim
    Re: Look up & Smile
    The idea is sound, but I'm not sure about the execution. The columns on the right are a little distracting and the reflection isn't clear enough to add significant interest to the shot. I do like the symetry of the ceiling grid and the glow at the far end. Agree w/ Addies Grandaddy that maybe adding another element would help - maybe even somebody with a camcorder videotaping the videotaper :)
  • 09-18-2008, 10:20 PM
    starriderrick
    Re: Look up & Smile
    Thanks for the feedback.Very good ideas.

    Rick
  • 09-22-2008, 11:09 AM
    MB1
    Re: Look up & Smile
    I look at the roof line at the bottom as the horizon and it is not level which bothers me. Otherwise I like the idea and video taping sign and reflections add some interest.