The "eyes" have it....

[ravenmore]

Ok, make that just the "eye"....

[gahspidy]

welcome to the forum, ravenmore.There is alot of noise and grain in this image, but I do like the raw effect it brings to it. I have an issue with the shadowy area of the unseen eye and think it would be stronger if you cropped that area out completely. Is this a small cropped area of a much larger image? If so, you may want to consider shooting again and cropping this tightly from the start. Looking forward to more works from you.

[Greg McCary]

I agree with Gary about the crop. I also think that the area just below the eye is to bright and lacks detail. I little PS work to be done. The idea behind the composition is nice and the persons facial expression works well.
Greg

[Charles Hess]

I like the concept and have always been a fan of high contrast images that erases facial detail to bring out the eyes. Here, this would be more effective with a tighter crop to eliminate the distracting collar. If this was a crop from a larger image, good effort, though next time try starting with the head filling the frame to give you more room to work your creativity.

[MB1]

This looks to me like you shot down towards the eye, I think I would like it better if the camera was level with or shooting straight into the eye. I would also like the left edge of the image moved either in or out, to me there it just the wrong amount of that hidden eye socket in the image.