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OK! Convince me that the bare feet, fit the clothes, umbrella and the rest of the shot!
Ronnoco
Hmmm... I'd say why not! It may look a bit strange but I don't see how it hurts the shot.
I'd be more concerned about the flat colors and the lack of contrast.
Hmmm... I'd say why not! It may look a bit strange but I don't see how it hurts the shot.
I'd be more concerned about the flat colors and the lack of contrast.
I like the framing and the dof.
Seb
Why not! Seb, well because the rest of the shot suggests a girl who would not be caught in the rain, with less than appropriate footware that fit her skirt and fancy blouse.
The colours, clothes, and umbrella however fit perfectly.
Why not! Seb, well because the rest of the shot suggests a girl who would not be caught in the rain, with less than appropriate footware that fit her skirt and fancy blouse.
The colours, clothes, and umbrella however fit perfectly.
Ronnoco
That's a valuable way to see it. She certainly doesn't look miserable.
On the other hand, what I saw is a young girl who may decide not to wear footware just for fun. After all, she has an umbrella and it's not raining.
That's a valuable way to see it. She certainly doesn't look miserable.
On the other hand, what I saw is a young girl who may decide not to wear footware just for fun. After all, she has an umbrella and it's not raining.
Seb
That would only fit, Seb, if she had the appropriate "playful" expression on her face. All the elements in the shot have to support the particular view.
Colors wise, I would go for something betwen this and your original. The colors seems a bit too strong (especially the umbrella). I do like the enhanced contrast.