the junglebus

this is a photo i can't decide if i like or not.. therefor, i'll let you decide for me

what do you think?

It seems a little too busy to me. What was your thoughts when you took this picture?

Jim B.

i was photographing for a theme; urban jungle.

i wanted to have both city and plants in the picture, and thought that a green bus would be perfect.

i like how the bus is camoflaged

Hello Hardmongo,


I think the railing is too distracting and bisects the picture uncomfortably. Your concept is intriguing but I don't believe this image is carrying it out for you so well. Hope that helps.

Regards,

CL Kunst

I agree with CLKunst, the railing is distracting...
and all the trees and bushes and stuff are a little much for me... I dont know, Im not too attracted to this shot...

thank you for your help! :)

I get the feel you were going for, like shooting from the jungle into the city, spying the bus on the road. The railing is a bit distracting and the distance between the camera and the plant-life seems to add distraction.

A little change in composition and the idea could produce a great photo.

/ Get it framed right and plan an accident in the gap *THAT* would be an urban jungle shot for you.
// Just kidding, but it would.

do i like it? no...

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by hardmongo

i was photographing for a theme; urban jungle.

i wanted to have both city and plants in the picture, and thought that a green bus would be perfect.

i like how the bus is camoflaged

---

I'm going to have to agree with you on this, and it's to busy also. I think a wide angle with half street and half woods????

Quote:

---

Originally Posted by hardmongo

this is a photo i can't decide if i like or not.. therefor, i'll let you decide for me

what do you think?

---

I am somewhat attracted by the lines and the shapes in the upper left corner but as a whole, this photo doesn't works for me as it lacks direction. I don't know what to look at.

Seb