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    Jersey Shore Two

    Cape May, NJ. What do you think?

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    Re: Jersey Shore Two

    color and composition are cool. I like the effect of the long exposure, but I'd back off on the high pass/sharpening as I'm not feeling all warm and fuzzy about all the halos around the posts.

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    Re: Jersey Shore Two

    I agree, the processing is way over the top.
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    Re: Jersey Shore Two

    The sky color is excellent.
    Foreground is a bit over the top though.
    Try silhouetting it.
    Look through a glass eye.
    Give it a few tries.
    Nothing goes right in its time.
    --Tally Hall--

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    Re: Jersey Shore Two

    Thank you for your critiques. The halos are a bit much, it comes from the HDR composition of the three exposure shots. I should have toned the HDR down a bit. I felt the silhouette wasn't that great this shot but I will head your advice on the next edit of this shot.

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