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    I've Been Waiting For You

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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    Very nice shot. I know how hard it is to capture something like this, let alone getting a good composition. I can feel that guy coming towards me, so you got some action. I also love the way the web curves around the subject. Very appealing.

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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    I hate spiders, but find them terribly intriguing. I like the composition, although I can't find a definite focal point. Looks a little soft.
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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    how big is this spider ? looks scary!

    focus seems to be a bit in front of the eyes, a bit blurry probably due to camera or subject movement

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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    Thank you for your comments. The shot was hand held, so if it's a off, that's probably the reason, I did use a bit of unsharp mask in PP. This spider was about 1" across from tip of right to tip of left rear legs. She was a cooperative subject, for a short while.

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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    Good shot. God I hate spiders.

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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    I like the composition. It seems the shadows have been brought up too much (the background behind the spider seems it should have been darker).

    Also, in situations like this, you "must" aim for the eyes. I put it in quotes because there are some instances when one doesn't but those instances are fewer. Because the eyes are out of focus, the entire shot appears off.

    Even handheld, you should shoot a lot of frames to ensure that you get a couple with the focus you want.
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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    Thanks Loupey,
    I took almost a dozen trying to balance a few aspects of the shot. DOF and focus were primary but I missed the eyes. A small subject, at ground level. The only way that I'll get better is to continually try to improve my technique and what to look out for.
    Thanks again, Ed

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    Re: I've Been Waiting For You

    Cool shot. wish the eyes were a bit more in focus. Good job though.

    I love spiders. I have always owned Tarantulas. Very fun pet.
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