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Thread: The Hot Seat

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    Re: The Hot Seat

    i like the composition here. i think the interior is a bit lighter than i'd like it on my screen. i wish it was very dark and forboding with only a few details, then the chair and light would stand out more.
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    Re: The Hot Seat

    Hmm. This one's HDR intensity's a little strong on my work monitor VM. I am also not sure that the composition is as strong as your last images. I do like the chair, but I'm not sure it works where it's at. This pic may actually work better w/o the chair, so to create a feeling of a wide open room. For some reason, I want to see more of either the ceiling or the floor: seems too equally split as is.

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    Re: The Hot Seat

    The wide angle distortions are pretty strong here, I'd prefer to see this scene from a higher, more compressed perspective. You've cut off more of the wall on the right side than the left side, which seems to contradict the otherwise perpendicular angle of this shot. Theres some CA noticable by the window on the left side top, possibly some in other windows too but hard to tell at this res. The lighting and shadows of the cieling doesn't seem to make any sense of the windows surrounding it. The window on the left is cut off just barely at the corner, poor cropping spot.
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