Home Alone

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  • 09-23-2008, 11:00 PM
    starriderrick
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    Home Alone
    I'm not sure what this was... only what it is...now :p Any ideas ? :confused:
    The light was borderline hostile / very harsh, I tried to salvage the levels.How goes it?
    Thanks

    Rick
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    300mm
    1/200
    F/10
    iso 320
  • 09-24-2008, 07:16 AM
    MB1
    Re: Home Alone
    It is a good subject and well worth some effort to get some better images. this is a nice enough establishing shot but the sky lacks interest and the light is too contrasty. I do like that you included some foreground interest with the broken wood.
  • 09-24-2008, 08:44 PM
    GB1
    Re: Home Alone
    Rick - I like the subject, but as for the image it just seems too geometric to me. The bus lining up with the side of the frame like that.. it just seems like a bookend. I don't know about the wood there either... 60/40 that it should go. It could disappear when you try the other angles I alluded to. Maybe you can get back there and have another go?

    G
  • 09-25-2008, 01:39 PM
    starriderrick
    Re: Home Alone
    Thanks guys for the good advice. The bus is gone....It's a vacant lot now...

    Rick
  • 09-25-2008, 02:36 PM
    danic
    Re: Home Alone
    Would love to see this in B&W. I think it would be a nice and contrasty shot.

    It's a pity you didn't get any of the interior...
  • 09-25-2008, 03:40 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: Home Alone
    I agree try a shot at a B&W.
  • 09-26-2008, 12:20 AM
    starriderrick
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    Re: Home Alone B & W
    Edit this if you please. B & W conversion.

    Rick
  • 09-26-2008, 02:13 AM
    Pink Dragonfly
    Re: Home Alone
    I´m missing the red bus....

    Mette