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    Interior Photo Critique

    Trying to get this table and the small space. Let me know what you think.

    Chad
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    The composition is definitely cozy to me, I think you did a good job capturing it. I think I might enjoy it more though if someone was sitting at the table reading a paper or something.

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    I think this is very good. The simplicity of it as well as the subtle movement of tones and lighting is good. My only gripe with this is the harsh reflection coming off the lower picture on the wall. I think if you had or have a dimmer switch for the overhead light and were able to lowewr the lighting , this would be perfect. I still like it as is. Good work ( also nice interior design, like that table with the cables supported from ceiling and beautiful chairs, wood floor. . . . . nice)
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    Quote Originally Posted by chadjohnston
    Trying to get this table and the small space. Let me know what you think.

    Chad
    Here is another with the owners puppy that must have snuck in. Sorta Cool
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    The first one is nearly perfect... really nice. I love the way you've captured the shapes along the chair backs, and have kept the exposure in check. Not only good shadow detail but the candles aren't blown out and neither is the hanging light. Verticals seems straight, table isn't slanted... great job!

    I would say that you might try to get those flowers in focus, but it's a minor thing in this case.
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    Good clean shot, just a couple of minor points. The support cable on the right side intersects the flowers and the candle on the right - moving those just a little would separate them. Also, there's a reflection of the light in the bottom picture - a little photoshop would take care of that. Interior shots can get very picky because of stuff like this - but good eye for the composition overall.

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    I really like the version with the puppy.

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