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    Industrial / Hotel Lobby

    interested in opinions. I like the progression.


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    Re: Industrial / Hotel Lobby

    Wonderful structure, nice patterns, and light , really nice !

    a couple of suggestions as if it were my image ...
    I would make this go more in a diagonal, rather than horizontal
    and make the blacks more black

    I once was at a big hotel with a an architecture similar to this,
    I was carrying a point and shoot , but when I was getting ready to take a shot a
    security guy came over and told me some crap about the building being copyrighted ...
    I did not take the shot

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    Re: Industrial / Hotel Lobby

    I really like the pattern and structure. It looks a little over exposed on the right hand side. Otherwise, very interesting.

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    Re: Industrial / Hotel Lobby

    I like it. It looks to me like it should be vertical, rotated 90* ccw. Is that the orientation it was shot with?

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    Re: Industrial / Hotel Lobby

    Good design. I like the left side, with it's darker tones, better than the right. Maybe if you do a few expts with different effects and try to increase the 3D aspects of it it would be even better.

    Hotel lobby huh... a hotel on Mars???

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    Re: Industrial / Hotel Lobby

    I think the grainy effect suits this, I'd also like this with a vertical orientation and darker at the bottom. Nicely spotted arne.
    Pete

    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

    I have no issues with you editing my photos

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