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“A great photograph is one that fully expresses what one feels, in the deepest sense, about what is being photographed, and is, thereby, a true manifestation of what one feels about life in its entirety...” - Ansel Adams
That's a sweet one, Brian. It looks like California, not Utah. Where did you shoot that? I would crop off some of that shadow area to the left, and a little of the bottom, though. I think it would make the composition better.
It is in SLC, in an area we refer to as "I Street".
You ever get up this way, I'll take you there.
I'll look at it again with your suggestions.
Thanks!
Brian
“A great photograph is one that fully expresses what one feels, in the deepest sense, about what is being photographed, and is, thereby, a true manifestation of what one feels about life in its entirety...” - Ansel Adams
“A great photograph is one that fully expresses what one feels, in the deepest sense, about what is being photographed, and is, thereby, a true manifestation of what one feels about life in its entirety...” - Ansel Adams
It looks like a pretty good shot, but I think it may have been a little over-sharpened a bit. Also, less depth of field would have been nice, perhaps shot with longer glass. The background is a bit too prominent.
Good action... I like the foreground being present in the shot. It gives perspective as to how high the biker got.
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