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Thread: Harley 1942

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    Harley 1942

    Hi,

    This is a old Harley:



    Thank you,

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    Re: Harley 1942

    hey, the composition doesn't work for me. It's just not natural how the bike is pointing up. I almost wanna rotate canvas 90° Counter Clockwise. Love the tones of black you acheived here though, they have a slight duotone quality to it that i love.
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    Re: Harley 1942

    I agree with Liban on the rotation. I like how you have the reflection on the star in the mirror. I also like the B&W conversion.
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    Re: Harley 1942

    Thank you for your comments, 90° Counter Clockwise is good idea

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    Re: Harley 1942

    For me I would like to see more of the Motorcycle.
    Is that a XA shaft drive horizontally opposed cylinders made for the African Campaign. But by the time Harley finished them the war was over. I think there was only 1000 made
    Troy

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    Re: Harley 1942

    For me I would like to see more of the Motorcycle.
    Is that a XA shaft drive horizontally opposed cylinders made for the African Campaign. But by the time Harley finished them the war was over. I think there was only 1000 made
    Troy

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    Re: Harley 1942

    Woops sorry for the double post
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    Re: Harley 1942

    . . . just delete the dupe. :thumbsup:
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    Re: Harley 1942

    I agree that the composition doesn't work. You could either back up and get more in or simply photographer smaller pieces of the bike, perhaps those that distinguishes it as an old Harley (?) That speedometer for example looks like an excellent item to do so. Maybe you can shoot it again.

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