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I have a problem with the darkness of the trees in this photo and the lack of separation between the tops of the gravestones and the background. Perhaps if you pulled back a slight bit to incorporate the stone in the bottom right might help it compositionally.
I like the idea and wish our local church had some interesting gravestones.
Roger
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HLCYG - Sorry but I don't really see a strong shot here. Its missing a spot to draw my attention to. The front stone also seems slightly soft (not sure, could be because of the white edge). I think if it had a person on the left side that it would be more interesting.
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