Emily,

I'm with Tim on this one. You are really doing well with these macro pictures but I think the use of a tripod and a greater depth of field is all your missing from these. As a busy mom personally I know, 'Who has time for a tripod?' But for macro work this is pretty much essential. As for the composition I would like to see more cap and stem, less grass. Keep going though! You're doing great!

Regards,
CLK