Rusty Art Piece

[Hexnut]

Does these work? Kinda abstract...

[Frog]

Sorry but for me they don't.
Your focus, dof, color, etc.are ok but its just the composition that I don't like.
It may be because I'm kind of old but wha tlines there are only lead my eye off frame and not into the picture.
Now, others may find this kind of thing fascinating, so don't take this critique too seriously.
Where are these?

[Hexnut]

Its an art installation accross from The Experience Music Project building and Seattle Center near the space needle. There's a walkway that these adjoin. Trying different things...Your opinions are always welcome frog.

Hex

[dwaugh]

The second and third are quite interesting, but the first doesnt do as much for me.

[Frog]

Ah! I knew they were familiar.