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    Not A Bird

    i treed this cute little guy so i could take a few images at eye level or there abouts

    100-400 at 200mm? and cropped to vertical on the first, then 400mm fullframe on the second. i could have spent all day with it, but it was not happy to be bothered by me.so i left quickly so he/she could go about the day in peace
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    Last edited by paulnj; 02-10-2004 at 08:01 AM.
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    This is a great shot, Paul. Nice and sharp, and good exposure. Not sure there is anything to critique. What a cute little guy!

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    Look at the sweet wet little nose

    I wish I could just kiss it!

    that is if I'm no to fond of my face when he chomps on it... lol

    what a great shot--I like the first the best...the colors the comp.

    yeah for you to post stuff thats not bird realted....I wanna see more street photography I think you can be (homeless guy post) and you would be great at it!

    yeah for you good job
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    Quote Originally Posted by natatbeach
    I wish I could just kiss it!

    that is if I'm no to fond of my face when he chomps on it... lol

    what a great shot--I like the first the best...the colors the comp.

    yeah for you to post stuff thats not bird realted....I wanna see more street photography I think you can be (homeless guy post) and you would be great at it!

    yeah for you good job
    No kissy these guys! LOL.

    Great great! 'Course I can't remember ever having any critiques on your pix...I just can't capture these things, and am in awe of them. Got any Cardinals?
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    Quote Originally Posted by paulnj
    i treed this cute little guy so i could take a few images at eye level or there abouts

    100-400 at 200mm? and cropped to vertical on the first, then 400mm fullframe on the second. i could have spent all day with it, but it was not happy to be bothered by me.so i left quickly so he/she could go about the day in peace
    Very nice. I used to get "Ranger Rick" magazine as a kid and this gives me flashbacks. I really like the clarity of the eyes.
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    Thanks All

    Quote Originally Posted by prbowhay
    Dear Paul:

    This is amazing! This needs to be a poster, or a magazine cover -- BOTH are excellent.

    You are a wonderful photographer, you can shoot ANY subject and do it well. I bet you can do fashion photography like Steve and Charles, and portraiture photography like Sebastian -- you are very skilled Paul. And, I am very impressed!

    Thank you for sharing these good shots with all of us.

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    i want a critique though...... i get the point that people like it, but i want to know what could improve it
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    Quote Originally Posted by paulnj
    i want a critique though...... i get the point that people like it, but i want to know what could improve it
    Fine...

    The first one is the better of the two, vertical framing works much better with that pose and BG. I wish I could see his whole body, that the lower section wasn't cut off. Contrast and exposure seem dead-on. Love the one eye showing, one in the shadow, adds to the feeling that he's trying to hide.
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