flower and moth

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  • 08-13-2008, 09:06 AM
    Dylan8i
    flower and moth
    i posted this one in the N/W forum as well. but i hardly ever post in here and thought id see what everyone says about this shot.

    it is a crop, maybe 2/3 of full frame. Shot was hand held, 60 mm macro, flash off camera hand held off to left side.

    http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c3...cropedited.jpg
  • 08-14-2008, 09:25 PM
    Dylan8i
    Re: flower and moth
    so i guess this is the perfect picture?
  • 08-15-2008, 02:29 PM
    jgredline
    Re: flower and moth
    Overall I like the image.

    What I don't like;
    Two things pop out to me.
    The colors look way over saturated and the bottom part of the flower is cropped and perhaps crop a little more off the right to get rid of the little remnant of the pink flower, or clone it out.

    What I do like;
    The bokeh is great, I like how sharp it is, especially where the insects eyes are, I like the detail of his wings, I like the composition allot and the crop (except for the cut flower)..All in all a fine capture in my book
  • 08-15-2008, 04:27 PM
    Dylan8i
    Re: flower and moth
    thanks Javier

    heres the full frame shot straight out of camera
    http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c3...s/DSC_1648.jpg


    and a second attempt at crop
    http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c3..._1648crop2.jpg
  • 08-15-2008, 04:42 PM
    jgredline
    Re: flower and moth
    Wow, I think those are both excellent, but the first one of the two is a home run right out of the box. The composition is perfect IMO.
  • 08-15-2008, 05:39 PM
    Pyro37976
    Re: flower and moth
    Great colors and composition, nice crisp image.
  • 08-16-2008, 08:03 PM
    Greg McCary
    Re: flower and moth
    I like the first edit. The eyes are sharp so I think the motion blur in the wings and tail work too. I like the heavy saturation and the composition.
  • 08-17-2008, 10:26 AM
    starriderrick
    Re: flower and moth
    Great bokeh,the moth is tack sharp were it needs to be.In this case I feel the super saturation is acceptable.IMHO the first image works the best.Nice work.

    Rick