The Flow

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  • 02-10-2007, 11:28 PM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    The Flow
    Eldorado Springs. The snow still hasn't melted up there, I almost busted my ass trying to take a picture.

    Again, critiques, edits welcome.
    http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/6...sthismiih5.jpg
  • 02-11-2007, 04:42 AM
    MarcusK
    Re: The Flow
    Although some of the stones in dark could benefit from better details, i think this is beautifully executed... the creamy water, and how it mixes with the snow make for a quite an interesting photograph...

    No doubt you almost busted your ass :D

    Nice job,

    Marc
  • 02-11-2007, 04:56 AM
    Greg McCary
    Re: The Flow
    Though it does seem a little dark in the foreground and personaly I would give it a PS boost, the compostion and subject is wonderful and well worth the ass busting. Great picture.
    Greg
  • 02-11-2007, 10:27 AM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
    Thanks guys, and I took you up on the brightening of the image, and here it is:
    http://img71.imageshack.us/img71/923...sthismiil4.jpg
  • 02-11-2007, 10:35 AM
    Jaedon
    Re: The Flow
    I prefer the first one as there is less blow out in the snow. Perhaps take the original and make a curves adjustment to the darks to bring in the detail without blowing out the whites?

    I love the framing and the subject so this is definitely worth a little bit mroe work to get it perfect. Great shot.
  • 02-11-2007, 11:31 AM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
    Thanks for the comments guys.
  • 02-11-2007, 11:36 AM
    trog100
    Re: The Flow
    very nice as it is.. but where desktop photography is concerned no image will ever be good enough.. u can play for ever..

    trog
  • 02-11-2007, 02:57 PM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
    Thankfully I still have the RAW.
  • 02-11-2007, 05:28 PM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
    I warmed it up a bit and upped the saturation with the RAW, and let's see what you guys think:

    http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/5...sthismiqj2.jpg
  • 02-11-2007, 07:48 PM
    freygr
    Re: The Flow
    I only would of adjusted the curves, just to lighten up the dark areas a just tad, so you could see just a little more detail.
  • 02-11-2007, 11:34 PM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
  • 02-11-2007, 11:43 PM
    MarcusK
    Re: The Flow
    Yeah...i like that last edit... and i think that this is the maximum you can do without hurting the image....

    :D good job!

    Marc
  • 02-11-2007, 11:59 PM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
    Thanks, I added a tiny bit of warmth too, and I like it more than the others.
  • 02-12-2007, 03:43 PM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
    I tried to HDR it and then tone map it, this is the result:
    http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/9...sthismijk5.jpg
  • 02-12-2007, 10:49 PM
    MarcusK
    Re: The Flow
    Well as you can see in the HDR, you are able to see more detail in the rocks, and it lost that sombre look... There is a lot of possibility in Post to fix things, and you will always need to do post work.... we just try to get the best we can with the camera, and then work things out!

    Final result is pretty good!

    I still need to learn a wee bit of HDR, but it just doesn't strike as too important at the moment!

    Marc
  • 02-12-2007, 11:32 PM
    Has He Lost His Mind?
    Re: The Flow
    Thanks for the support Marc.