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    Flight of the Bumblebee

    Hey, I'm new the forum and to photography in general and was just searchin for some feedback on this shot. I took it at a church fair my mumsy was putting on. All comments would be greatly appreciated.
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    Re: Flight of the Bumblebee

    Hi Vin

    I like the idea here. Tthe picture came out nice. The kids in the bee are sharp, and one is even smiling

    I think if you slow the shutter speed down you could really have a wild thing going here. It would also tend to abstract out the background people and items. Give it a try!

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    Re: Flight of the Bumblebee

    Thanks GB1, Yeah it didnt completely come out how I wanted it to, I definetly wanted everything else besides the kids in the bee to be blurry and abstract. But I guess I wont have the oppurtunity to try it again until the next fair... oh well. Thanks again.

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    Re: Flight of the Bumblebee

    Hiya Vin.....welcome.
    The colors seem a little washed out. You might boost the saturation a click or two. It'll make the picture seem more vibrant.
    John

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    Re: Flight of the Bumblebee

    Hey guys, Thanks for all your help and I'm sorry about the cheesey title. I'll post some other shots when I take some that are worthwhile for people to look at. Thanks again.

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