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    First boat trip?

    A grab shot from a recent wander around Camden:



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    Re: First boat trip?

    Really good grab shot Matt and well noticed. It looks like the little fella is just about ready to jump in. I like the reflection of the water in the window. I wonder if a little more water being visible would help the shot.
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    Re: First boat trip?

    Nice pic, maybe 'too much' negative space, though it is quite creative in composition. Good exp. Might have been nice as a zoom in to the kid? He sure looks like he was having fun trying to figure it all out anyways..............

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    Re: First boat trip?

    I agree with Tom about a little more water. Other than that, the tones are great and a nice eye.

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