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    Fine art

    Finally got around to getting to a local dam that has been a long running tradition of being a canvas for our local taggers. Have at it.

    edit: It seems to be a bit softer here compared to LR...perhaps something to do with my export settings?
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    Re: Fine art

    I love the saturation in this. Great image. Not a lot of compositional punch, but quite appealing.

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    Re: Fine art

    very nice. the writing on the floor gives it a nice depth that would otherwise be lacking.
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    Re: Fine art

    Thanks guys. Once the tone mapping came in, I had way to many routes to go.
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    Re: Fine art

    Love how you composed this on the angle you did. great subject. I just wish the bg was not so contrasty and tone mapped and somehow faded a bit softer from the fg. It would add more depth and allow the writing in the fg to be that much more profound. Just a personal preference for the editing, but the subject and comp is excellent.
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    Re: Fine art

    Good suggestion Gary. I've give it a run when I can.
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