fashion

[PhilF]

Avedon inspired shot

[Asmarlak]

I like the timeless look to it. Very nice bright B&W. Good work.

[armando_m]

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[jetrim]

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same here...

[PhilF]

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same here...

fixed. is it showing now?

[jetrim]

Yep, shows now. Very nice work Phil! There may be some very small issues with the really dark shadow at the far crease from nose to mouth (perhaps a bit of dodging) and there's something funky at the far hip. May be a shadow, but can't really tell at this size. Love that you captured her on the way back down giving that great lift to the hair, and your conversion is beautiful.

[PhilF]

Yep, shows now. Very nice work Phil! There may be some very small issues with the really dark shadow at the far crease from nose to mouth (perhaps a bit of dodging) and there's something funky at the far hip. May be a shadow, but can't really tell at this size. Love that you captured her on the way back down giving that great lift to the hair, and your conversion is beautiful.

thanks.. I'll fix it.

[GB1]

Works quite well IMO. Nice capture of the model, reflection, and exposure. My only complaint is the slight burn out on her forehead and maybe her upper shirt area. Your watermark actually adds to the shot - nice choice of font.

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[armando_m]

Wow, darn fine job !

[draymorton]

Excellent. Far be it from me to try and critique this. You've probably already fixed that dark patch by her left hip, which leaves me with nothing. Great work indeed.

[Anbesol]

Awesome! The image made me think of Avedon, and then I read thats what you were going for. You really hit those BW tones and lighting style that he does. Damned fine work man.

[PhilF]

thanks guys.

revised version